Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Prologue


I've added a prologue in the anticipation that anyone, being familiar with P&P or not, would be able to have everything they needed to know in just 2 pages before they start my story.  Am I missing anything that applies to my story??  I don't know how to put it ahead of my first chapter here at my blog unless I just add it as part of the first chapter.

Coming soon:  Extended Chapter 5 with more D&E&C.F love triangle.  Still working on it...

4 comments:

  1. It is consise yet does a very clear job of setting up your story and the relationships. A nice addition. Well done. Elyse

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  2. It's really quite perfect, Amy. Familiar, yet uniquely yours. And I think that it improves your story, and, like you said, makes it more meaningful to someone who isn't extremely well-versed in P&P.

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  3. Nicely Done...I very much adore your writing style. And now, I am all anticipation for that extended Chapter 5 you spoke of.

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  4. Thanks. I will let you know when I re-post chapter 5.

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