I finished my tweaking to Chapter 6, and have re-posted it. I originally told you it was Chapter 5, but I was wrong. It's a very hefty chapter now--I might be able to split it into two later. I addressed Richard's feelings in this and it made me have an even bigger crush on the man. We even have a dinner that includes Caroline. I couldn't be done with her quite yet.
Now I will be working on a new chapter between 11 and 12, where we will follow Darcy while Lizzy is at Pemberley. I already mentioned that he gets a scene with Mademoiselle Adele. I hope it works.
I have only 7,000 more words to go, and then I can start the formidable process of looking for publishers. My knees are already knocking.
Thank you for your input with the prologue. Please let me know what you think about the new Chapter 6. Enjoy!!